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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Anyhow, I don't see what your problem with they eye is... it looks interesting to me and pretty good. The ear does seem to fit, somehow, so good job there. As for the perspective experiment, it seems to me like the picture is trying to convey a perspective with the back half of the head, the neck, the back part of the jaw, and the horn that doesn't quite match up with the main "beak". I think the beak provides a bit of a mismatch with the rest of the picture perspective-wise.
Note that I am trying to provide a somewhat useful critique because I'm sure you're tired of my constant praise. ;-]
Before I messed with it too much, the eye really made the face look like it was pointing away from the viewer. It still does, but not as well.
The muzzle looked worse, actually. I tried fixing it so it didn't look more "face on," but I couldn't get it right no matter how much I tried. I really don't know how to fix it. *sigh*
You know how much I grumble about my drawings, so praise is nice. Though critique is always welcome, too, so keep right on doin' that. I can't know if others see mistakes if they don't tell me. :-]
Glad ya like it, though!
Anyway, it's really wonderful and has a great depth of view due the smooth shading